Venomous snakes surround me,
In a pond with blue petals afloat,
As frogs green watch from beyond,
Their big eyes unblinking,
Under the shade of a tree further,
As I sweat fearfully and worry,
How to get out of this mess in a hurry,
My heart thumps and I think fast,
As the hissing continues,
In a mad dance of sleepy frenzy,
I awake in my bed,
Excited and nauseous,
Very Afraid and drowsy.
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
These was one of the dreams that makes you happy when you are finally allowed to wake up!
Good one.
Reviewed by Meva Onyurt (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2004
Esra you have the flair of finding enticing metaphors. Your short poems are full of imagery that comingles with human psyche. Especially the sound I hear when I read this poem makes me nervous quite like yOU in the poem.
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Good one.
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