Entities drifting
Along in an ocean with the others
Following the tides and currents
Turbulent storms cause some to drown
Some exert energy and break free of the pack
They brave the reefs and crashing surf
Some even make it to solid ground
Only to find that they can no longer swim
Others learn to adapt and stand up
Of these some continue onwards upwards
They climb the mountains and yearn to go higher
Some slide back down the mountain
Finding a place of safety from the climb
Some make it to the top
But they wont be there long
Still others help each other to find happiness
These are the ones who really succeed.
I liked the patterns and flow of this
Cheers
Allain
Marvelous attempt. Keep going.
Like your choices to mark the various levels.
Vicky