Beautiful. This poem makes one did deep to see if onr has done that for the ones we love.
One thing I would add, We always need you in every way you need to be needed.
THIS POET KNOWS WHAT HE IS LOOKING FOR. FOR HE IS SEARCHING FOR THAT KIND OF 'TREASURE' SOUGHT BY SO MANY MEN. A 'GOOD THING'(PROV 31:10-31), NOT YET FOUND. KEEP THE FAITH, MY SON. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE AND MUCH BLESSINGS. JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS
Asa, there is a depth beyond the purity of your words--it is written in the 'in-betweens' and soft pauses. This is a complete and selfless love, ever-giving. Beautiful! God bless ~Elizabeth
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
Love ya!
Jane
One thing I would add, We always need you in every way you need to be needed.
no excess, no mush, and such admirable control
gives the work the depth and resonance of good writing.
Thank you, Joyce, for this posting.
John
poem. And a very good one.
God bless You
Tony
Regis
Daniel
Well done
Hugs, Diana..
Anna
God bless,
Lew
Blessings,
Christine
George