I like this poetry! I read it aloud (don't do that often) and it flowed all the way through. Some very deep thought going on here and your choice of words really drew me in.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
Sherry
I am extending an invitation to you to come see my webpages dedicated to the victims of genocide in Darfur, Western Sudan.
http://www.voicesforAfrica.homestead.com/index.html
Thanks,
Jim Dunlap
'A heart gets broken to never mend
no strength, no courage to even pretend.
Onward we travel to futures unsure
burning thoughts of a love once pure. "
Lady Peg
Nice piece.
-James