Thoughts of the Tide (poem) by Jane Noponen Perinacci on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 22, 2013

This could be about the tide and the ocean; to me, it also symbolizes experiences in life. Thank you, Jane. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Springer

Reviewed on March 21, 2013

Ah, the mysteries of the ocean! One of my favorite things is walking along a beach on a cloudy day or in the rain, pondering the wonders below and where the water has been, what secrets it holds...well done!

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2013

Such a resonant symbol of the 'turbid ebb and flow' of life's oceanic journey... I like your imagery and the emphasis on the fleeting nature of our time for exploration... even as we scan the shore, we can only catch a glimpse of what will be no more... I am reminded of that old Seals and Crofts song: "We may never pass this way again..."

Thanks for a soft-hued poem that teases one out of thought, Jane.

Roger

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

The tide, yes it is a wonder of it's own.

We enjoy it but do we really understand it.

Well done Jane!

Peace, love and abundant blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

~Jane~
The tide and it's beauty to watch and to listen.
Treasures unfathomed discovery. Alas! sigh! Wonderful thoughts.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

I LOVE the tide rolling in...puts me to sleep. Thanks Jane!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

It's like being with a woman when she's really drunk. The tide is out and she reveals everything. After she sobers up, you'll never get that close again.

Gunna-Britt Margaret, a beautiful Swedish girl and a twin like me, whispered in my ear, �Eric,� when we kissed while she was falling down drunk.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

Applies to more than the tide, eh?
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

I have always wished for the tide to go out really far, so I can see what is on the bottom near my hometown...but with global warmth & the melting ice caps, I think I have a better chance of seeing my hometown being permanently flooded than extreme low tide...e

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

You made me think with this one Jane, hidden treasures just below the surface!

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

take the opportunity when it presents itself
life is short :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

as one who once vivited the ocean a lot low tide is great..i really liked this yeah
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

In other words, Jane, take advantage of the immediate situation, for it may not come again. Your theory can work to our advantage for many things we confront during our lives. Good poem. Good insightful writing.