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Cabin
by Jane Noponen Perinacci → (All Poetry by Jane Noponen Perinacci)
Friday, August 9, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Heh he hehhhhh!!!!


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He needed to go find himself
Walked mountain paths and streams
Not knowing destinations place
Walking along in dreams

Abandoned cabin welcomed him
A place to spend the night
Alone inside a place to hide
Pitch dark only moonlight

Green mist florescent floating through
From just outside the door
Footsteps so faintly creeping yes
Creeping across the floor

Months later hikers came upon
This cabin 'neath the moon
Some say inside a corner dark's
A strange huge green cocoon


Jane Noponen Perinacci




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Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on August 12, 2019
Much to play with mentally with this interesting piece of wordsmithing. I'm reminded of the many times one's perception of a seemingly obvious perception turns out to be false. Loved this piece.

Reviewed by Patricia Hilliard
Reviewed on August 12, 2019
I've always wondered about people who go off to the country to "find themselves." I grew up in the country and realized the self you find is who you are with people. Nature couldn't care less, so what self would you find in the woods? I always enjoyed the woods for the quiet and peace, but the challenges we need to overcome in life are in the living with people! That green cocoon was death and a real escape from life's challenges.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 11, 2019
Spooky! Sounds like a place I visited as a kid. I spent the night and so did another Jane. We must have been crazy. We must have been insane!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 11, 2019
Looks like he found a warm snug bed to sleep in! Serially, I really like the way this one rhymed and gave that eerie feeling at the end. One of your best.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 10, 2019
Eerie, Jane... ...and effective. Your poem inspired a limerick...

Away from His own Kind

A fellow felt he had to find,
A place away from his own kind;
He did find a place,
Away from the race,
That is where he found peace of mind. 📝🍁🦉

Love, peace, and best wishes to you,

Regis.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 10, 2019
WELL, YOU SURE WENT THERE, JANE...AND YOU DID IT SO VERY WELL! ENJOYED THIS LITTLE 'THRILLER', THANKS FOR THE SHARE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 10, 2019
You've given new meaning to the old refrain "I don't want a ranch out on the prairie, I just want a shack up in the hills." Yep.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on August 10, 2019
Be afraid. Be very afraid.
There's mystery and horror in the night.
Take care, beware,
of green cocoons in the moonlight.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 9, 2019
You take us into the depths of a mystery and leave us there. Beware hikers and other riff-raff.

Reviewed by Timothy Popely (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2019
I'm left with so many questions! Is the guy in the cocoon or is it whatever was creeping across the floor? Looking forward to part 2! <3


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