Go on say what you FEEL! (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Go on say what you FEEL!
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Say what you feel, As long as it is real, Time for me now to partake of a meal...
Go on say what you FEEL…! This poem may suck, This poem may make you chuck, This poem may be a lame duck, This poet may be mired in muck… Or then again this poem may have class, So don’t feel you have to kiss my ass, If you have within you any brass, You can say what you want even to harass… Do we learn from constant praise? I do find myself completely amazed, That no one has negative to put forth, How many times have I dealt with this subject? Who knows for sure this may be the fourth… I have to say I go with the flow, I did from the beginning what others did, As they seemed to be in the know, I would not if I could help it, look for negative to bestow, At times I do still notice it, being unwilling to show it although… © ed ~ 3/27/05

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

I feel pretty... oh, so pretty... I feel pretty and witty and gaaaaaaay... and I pity, any girl who isn't me today! (lalalalalalalala)

Is that what you mean, Edwardo? your friend, Broadway Bertha xox

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Ed,

This poem didn't suck. It wasn't your best, but it didn't make me chuck...LOL

Guess the only thing "wrong" with it is your meter--your rhyming is spot on. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Hope this helped (and didn't send you over the edge) LOL

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

i loved this, especially about the poem making you chuck! LOL too funny! the rhyming is impeccable! humorous write; keep on writing! i love how you write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

well said, well rhyme. by the way, sometimes your rhyming "efforts" suck and you can't spell no bettern' me, and as for your grammer...go back to 101, but a poet you do try to be.

oh, and your hairs too long, you got BO, you need to brush your teeth, and what's with this trailer park trash? you got the personality of a wall...and, and, and as for Rufus...(well better leave Rufus outta' the critque, Him i like). oh yeah, quit complaining about the weather...you got a car & a mobile home...MOVE.

other than that you write pretty good shit.
TX

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

If I must tell what I feel you might blush anyways...lol!!

So I will stick to the good review ...and say well done yet again Pal!!

Love Tinkit The Evil One ;(

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

I like to feel Michelle...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

i don't feel anything from this poem but i think it's pretty good ;)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Well Ed, I always say what I feel and not always nice either,
yet I'm the only one you don't read, so go figure! hahaha

Eileen

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

I'll tell you what I feel. When I read your work I see brillance. I see humor well done. I see a poet who tells it like it is in the way of sassy rhymes. I see someone who care enough to share his work with us. I see a man...