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Trapped...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Totally ficional...


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She was the biggest & best,

The longest, widest & highest,

More men she had than a carrier,

Of her stern decks she employed a Harrier*…

 

Last was she of the series super dreadnaught,

Eighteen inchers that could pound a shore,

Or destroy other smaller craft at a greater distance, sure,

She was everything her designers & builders wished for,

But a secret she held, no one of it knew,

Even by the men that on her decks fought…

 

Someone, while being built, died and was trapped in her steel,

This worker was never found, his body sealed in superstructure,

Once the old girl was put out to pasture, eerie things began to happen,

Psychic’s could not board her, of pain and fear they began to feel…

 

Don’t go down alone into the bowels of her lower decks,

Or for sure & certain you could be lost down there,

Man made that moved to hem you in, the objects,

Your screams drowned out by mechanical noise,

Noise that should not occur on a “dead” ship,

Until crushed and a part of steel platting you became,

Never again to know of life’s joys…

 

 

© ed 2/28/09


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 Reviews of "Trapped..."
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on March 1, 2009
Yikes! what a squeeze. Could be a movie. Excellent. J'nia

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
Great story and with the exception of throwing in a reference to Davy Jones looker this is one of the best ship ghost story poems I have read in a long time.

fee

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
I really like this one Ed. My Dad was a chief fire controllman on a battleship. He told me that those eighteen inchers could pound the hell out of one city block from twenty miles at sea.

Walt

Reviewed on February 28, 2009
This has a claustrophobic feel to it. Are you sure this is fictional, or was this born of a nightmare?!? Well told, in any event - excellent, Ed.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 28, 2009
You tell a dang good yarn, Eddo; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
Lil'brother, thing that go thumping in the night...I see that PeeWee was filling your head, although you wrote here a good and true sailor story.

Evard(k)

PS. Telling Ma 'bout PeeWee, he ain't no shame.


Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
Bizarre, shocking and imaginative use of hard as steel reality vs. psychics abuse of the reader. Actually, I enjoyed this very much!

Thanks again Ed, for the trip man! Ghoulish...

Starman

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
A spooky tale you tell here, Ed, for this old sea dog. -gene.


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