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Fog
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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Sailing into a fog,

Hoping for a wind.

Can't see beyond the fore deck,

Blind as blind can be.

 

Hours of nothingness.

Then a clearing shows.

A ship is dead ahead,

Hard a starboard, comes a yell.

 

Too late, we hit her broard sides,

Tearing each others hull.

Their captain was swearing-

Not much we could do.

 

The damage was not that bad,

And when repairs were made,

We continued on course

And picked up a strong head wind.

 

We reached our destination,

A little worse for tear.

Cargo was unloaded,

Crew off for a beer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Fog"
Reviewed on August 2, 2012
Fog is an amazing thing! and as you've stated unbelievable dangerous.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on August 2, 2012
I have enjoyed reading this as a narrative poem that can also be interpreted as a metaphor, depending on the reader. Thank you for sharing.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 1, 2012
IT CAN GET PRETTY FOGGY ON THE SEAS OF LIFE...WE CAN CRASH TOO 'CAUSE WE COULDN'T SEE AHEAD FAR ENOUGH. BUT THANK GOD CRASHING IS NOT NECESSARILY THE END...JUST A DELAY AND REPAIR. AND WHAT A BLESSING IT IS TO FINALLY REACH OUT DESTINATION AFTER ALL. PARCHED FROM OUR EXPERIENCES BUT ABLE TO ENJOY A RELIEF FOR WHAT 'AILS' US. THANKS FOR SHARING, GEORGE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on August 1, 2012
Sailing in the fog and the rain
such mysteries to me *George*
so I really enjoyed the adventure!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
Have a beer on me...e

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
George, Very nice!

Deborah

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
sounds a lot more casual and matter of fact than the reality i bet.
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
And all is well upon the Seven Seas . . .


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