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Forged On An Anvil
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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Forged on an anvil

To the right size.

Dipped in water

To stiffen the prize.

 

Blacksmith of ages

Knew his craft well.

Some knight would wield me-

Some soul gone to hell.

 

Where are those blacksmiths,

Gone with their craft?

And where are the knights,

That gave me the shaft?

 

Somewhere in the castles,

Where ghosts now roam.

Are the legends of yesterday,

No longer are they born.


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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on August 4, 2012
Perhaps the armour is not worn any
more in recognition *George* but the
blacksmith's still attend to the knights
who continue to fight for our honor....

I really enjoyed your poem,
Lady Vivian

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2012
Beautiful, lovely...

Reviewed on August 2, 2012
This is an interesting write for you to pen George. Enjoyed. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 2, 2012
What a banquet of images George, wonderful!
So good to see you writing here again.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 2, 2012
I really like that line: “that gave me the shaft?” I'm proud to say that my great-great-grandfather was a blacksmith in the Civil War. That's probably why he and his five brothers all returned home. All of these writers that write about chivalry are just repeating old stories over and over again.

Unlikely heroes are still around. Steve Jobs has wrought magic from silicon, aluminum, and plastic.

Ron

Reviewed on August 2, 2012
Now this is very cool!

I like to see these men of yore
working inside their black smithing shop. I can see a
man a wee bit heavy with black apron on and sweat on his brow.
Holding his sword over the fire and returning it to the anvil
as he hammers it it sparks flying.

Those ghosts of the past always remain within us! They are our legends, like Jerry says... "oh yes, they are there." :)

Great write!

Love and Light
Carol

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 2, 2012
Ah yes, George, but as you say they are still around, we are just unable to see them. Sometimes though, in the wee hours of mourn, if we lay very still and keep our eyes closed we can hear them. They're there. Oh yes, they are there.


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