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Losing A Part Of Life
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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Gaining momentum,

Like a sled on ice.

I whiz past tomorrow,

And into next week.

 

What have I lost

In these passing days,

That went by so fast,

Like I was in a daze?

 

Time escaped from me,

As did the world around.

All memory lost,

Never to be found.

 

Was it worth the speed

That carried me away?

For I left undone,

Much that I had to say.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Losing A Part Of Life"
Reviewed on September 6, 2012
Time is relative because we have a frame
of reference and hence speeds by quickly
However these past few days I have
discovered that when one lies in bed sick
with no frame of reference of time it moves
quite slow.
Perhaps this is our reckoning when we are
forced to slow down, we take note of what
is around us to the tiniest detail. I find
this is not a bad thing, but enlightening :)

Love write George

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
Very BEAUTIFUL!!!!! 'All memory lost never to be found.Was it worth the speed that carried me away?'------ I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
I HAVE HAD THE HONOR OF READING SO MUCH OF YOUR WORK, GEORGE...WORK THAT HAS TOUCHED SO MANY DIFFERENT AREAS OF YOUR LIFE AND THUS, AS TOUCHED MINE. THE JOYS AND SORROWS OF YOUR LIFE THAT YOU'VE SHARED FROM SUCH AN UNIQUE AND TIMELY PERSPECTIVE, I HAVE COME TO LOOK FORWARD TO. AND YOUR 'VOICE' IS BOTH APPRECIATED AND ENJOYED. AS WE GET OLDER SOME THINGS IN LIFE WE DO LOSE, BUT THEN THE VERY BEST OF OTHER THINGS CONTINUE TO SHINE THROUGH...LIKE THIS OPEN AND HONEST SHARING. THIS WORK TO ME SAYS...YOU ARE STILL A POET! GOD MADE YOU A POET AND AS A POET YOU WILL ALWAYS FEEL LIKE THERE IS SOMETHING MORE TO SAY. NEVER LET ANYONE OR ANYTHING TAKE THE DESIRE TO 'SAY MORE'...THE DESIRE TO 'WRITE POETRY'...AWAY FROM YOU! WE ARE LISTENING, GEORGE BECAUSE WE KNOW THAT YOUR PRESENT PATH...IS OUR FUTURE PATH. AND WE CAN ONLY PRAY THAT BY THE TIME WE REACH YOUR AGE...WE CAN STILL WRITE HALF AS WELL AS YOU DO. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
Catching up is certainly
hard to do...but worth the
effort for us reading your
unsightful poetry *George*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on September 5, 2012
It's funny how life seems to speed as time passes. At least you're filling your time with something important.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
With these, almost daily, poems, you are saying a lot. Just keep it up and before you know it, you'll be moving as fast as time.

Ron

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
If only we could turn back the hands of time and have a do over ... Great poem!

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
when i was in my 30's i told my mom that couldn't wait to get old just to see what happened to all the people i cared for...well now i've seen most of it and am looking forward, but not in a hurry, to see the 'rest of the story' and i now know what she meant by 'sooner than you know you'll be searching for your 'time-brakes'

good one george

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
I marvel at the way speed seems to speed up and yes even race us along the older we get. Looking back...no regrets, it got me where I am today.
Fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
The tick-tock never stops. We look back on things laying in the waste of our forgotten past and realize we could have done so much to make looking back more pleasurable.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
very cool write my friend, yes it speeds by all to fast
budd


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