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Brokenheart
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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This poem is about a girl whose boyfriend dumped her without giving her a reason. This is written as if I were the woman but is only using poetic license.

Who has the tools

To fix a broken heart?

Surely not a plumber

Or carpenter from the start.

 

May the pieces meld together,

Once I've started a new life.

Best medicine is  my own,

To move away from this strife.

 

What caused it,

is still what hurts more.

No warnings,  just an ending.

To a marriage that was in store.

 

One can swallow their pride,

If they knew what went wrong.

There were no warnings;

Our love was rich and strong.

 

Yet one day it was over,

When he said his last godbye.

The wonder of what was to be,

I'll never understand, and cry.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Brokenheart"
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on November 18, 2012
I know the feeling....very well written George!!

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on November 17, 2012
Cleverly written of a woman's
broken heart *George* I can
feel the sadness....

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on November 16, 2012
Closure is important for everyone...
Without it we are left floating wondering
what happened...

Excellent write for I'm sure this has happened to many..


Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 15, 2012
perfectly worded from the visage of the broken hearted girl, it is hard to repair a broken heart when you cannot fathom the reason for the ending, time for the healing can be lenghtened without that to help
budd

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2012
Sorry to hear and time heals all things, George.

Deborah

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 15, 2012
Sadly sweet and encompassing, George, with feelings of bewilderment, hurt and broken trust bared for the reader to sorrow with in understanding.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 15, 2012
I'm reminded of the Texan looking the the Eiffel Tower and saying to his companions "Give me a crew of 10 and some stucco, and I'll have this thing fixed in a week." Stucco is your answer, George.

Reviewed on November 15, 2012
Time helps heal a broken heart. The hardest part is giving time time.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 15, 2012
You named this correctly, George, Brokenheart,for sure.


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