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Maybe it's the words
That don't seem to fit.
Or maybe it's me
Who has lost his wit.
Never-the-less we go on
In an endless pursuit.
Can't seem to catch the carrot
Or the guy in the black suit.
Once, when I was near,
I almost caught the wimp.
Slipped through my fingers
I'm just a poor simp.
Well maybe tomorrow
Will be a new day.
Things will work out,
It will fall my way.
Reviews of "Maybe"
New Poetry by George J. Carroll
The rhyme-and flow is excellent, too..
You are still the Master Poet who wields a subtle but powerful pen.
Love & Hugs,
Rhonda
but a better day yet..
Lady Vivian
Love ya!
Jane