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The Recruit
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Monday, February 9, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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It was mandatory-

Not an idle command.

You hopped when

They barked an order.

 

Feet sore from marching

Ten miles or more.

Conditioning was the aim.

Follow orders given, your command.

 

 


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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 9, 2015

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 9, 2015
That's right George. No thinking on your own.
Now, fall down! I mean roll over! Oh shit.
I mean fall out! :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 9, 2015
Many men marching to the same beat. A mighty army for the meat grinder that is war. When Hitler and Emperor Hirohito lock stepped their armies, we had to, too.



With war becoming more long distance all the time, is such conditioning, mental and physical to follow the line of command, still valid?



My nephew is in boot camp right now for the National Guard. He is marching 10 miles in sloppy North Carolina winter, jumping to commands so that he doesn't have to do additional calisthenics, and nursing sore feet from ill fitting new boots.



Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 9, 2015
No rolling of the eyes either . . . Just march grunt.


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