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Blood Of An Idea
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Wednesday, March 11, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I am caught in the undertow

Of ideas that refuse to die.

They keep driving and pulling,

All I do is let out a sigh.

 

I have fought the battle  till dusk.

The enemy tasted my sword.

When will the blood of an idea

Enter my hallowed lonely ward.

 

There in the bed beside me lies

The remains of battered thoughts, dead.

Bravely they faced the enemy,

Now they just comfort me instead.

 

I shall rise in the morrows light,

And surpress the fear that remains.

I need but my quill filled with ink

To leave posterity its stains.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Blood Of An Idea"
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 12, 2015
Very well written and received!!!
Peace love and light
Amber

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 12, 2015
Tis an idea of blood,
Founded I think in the mud,
Of a storied oldish stud,
Certainly in no way a dud,
Written by, of poetry, a blue blood...

And on a separate note, yes, that last line does tie it all together and explains it quite well, at least to me...-e-


Reviewed on March 11, 2015
Agree with jerry

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
interesting to end it with "prosperity it stains" ... in a spiritual sense it sure does ...

Reviewed on March 11, 2015
This is a very deeply penned poem. I read much more into it. I'm proud of you, George!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
That's the write stuff. I have tried to write while falling asleep. Those ideas come, but they're hard to keep.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
A really cool write about the struggle with ideas that a writer has in his/her arsenal of thoughts. The last line really wraps it up tightly. Let's hope that those cool stains never fade from the page.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
Eh . . . Seems to me like you have it all together for this poem, George. Great symmetry and perfect rhyming. You're there man.


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