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His Queen
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Saturday, May 23, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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It led to a discussion

That fed on her obesity.

Poor woman had no friends,

So she took to eating with delight.

 

Every morsel she ate

Turned into fat and it showed.

A busy body complained

That she should eat less.

 

It seems she did not lack

From hearing these comments.

One day she decided to diet.

Well the pounds just melted away.

 

Within months she had transformed

Into a very good looking woman.

She lost a few hundred pounds

And now the boys started to take notice.

 

But she remembered the unkind

Words spoken about her.

A prince of a man came to town

And fell madly in love with her.

 

Within months he married her

And she became his queen.

Never to be seen in that town

As he moved her to his castle.

 


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 Reviews of "His Queen"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 25, 2015
Love this story and the ending, George. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 23, 2015
...the great crown of creation George...is your jewel-poetry...the struggle for a crown as a plot...a facet of such a jewel...Thanks for sharing your verse.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on May 23, 2015
She was overweight,
A fat and sassy lass.
Then she lost lots of pounds,
and now stretch marks cover her ass.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 23, 2015
That queen was my sister-in-law. The only problem is what to do with the leftover skin.

Ron

Reviewed on May 23, 2015
Good for her! I like this!

Love ya!

Jane


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