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Marbelized Thoughts
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Thursday, June 4, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I had a few marbelized thoughts

That were sticking me in the ribs.

Had to put them on paper,

Then tore them up into bits.

 

Seems even the best of thoughts

Don't survive in the black and white.

Takes more than a few words written,

To excite anothers sight after reading them.

 

But dunce that I am, will stand in the corner

And dream up some nonsensical  cliches.

Bear with me as I'm nearing the end

Of your patience and mine.


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 Reviews of "Marbelized Thoughts"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2015
Yes, George, many times something sounded good in my head and in the black and white it became dead...enjoyed.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on June 5, 2015
Aw, George, we understand. I like the wisdom of "Takes more than a few words written, To excite anothers sight after reading them."
Sometimes, it takes a lot of writing and re-writing, to polish them into a beautiful thing.

Connie

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on June 5, 2015
Are those thoughts marbled like a choice cut of meat?

Michael D.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 5, 2015
I'm bare-ing with you as you requested, but how long do I have to remain naked? ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 4, 2015
My thoughts come out as confetti.

Reviewed on June 4, 2015
Isn't that just the way it goes! I love the last two lines!

Love ya!

Jane


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