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Hell
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Monday, November 23, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Each step takes me closer

To my destiny preordained.

Nay, not in a religious sense,

But in complexity never stained.

 

There the road winds ever forward,

Passing the years which have elapsed.

Seeing the faces long removed,

Yet knowing they have found their place.

 

Forward ho, a voice cries.

Calling as if from the highest

Hill, yet knowing it must not be so.

For I am a lonesome soldier.

 

The battle has ceased.

The smoke burns my eyes.

The smell of a rotting corpse,

Lets me know it must be hell.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Hell"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 25, 2015
There is nothing more abhorrent than the smell of rotting flesh. For those, like you, who have been through it, life can be heaven or hell, depending upon circumstances. Sometimes we don't have a choice. Like you have lived it.

Ron

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 25, 2015
WOW!
POWERFUL AND POIGNANT, KING!
It just makes me think of the Scripture from 1 Peter 4:13
"But rejoice, inasmuch as ye are partakers of Christ's sufferings; that, when his glory shall be revealed, ye may be glad also with exceeding joy."
I praise GOD He brought you through the war (Thank You for Your Service!)and I know full-well that great rewards await you,
beloved King George.
xo Rhonda

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 25, 2015

compelling read


Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 24, 2015
General: "Soldier, are you going to Heaven or Hell?
Soldier: "Pick one general, and I'll hand it to you by sundown."
Old soldiers never die...

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2015
I believe our lives are a mixture of heaven sent
and hell, great expressive poetry, George.

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed on November 23, 2015
Thank goodness you made it back!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 23, 2015
Gotta bit nasty on the uptake here, George . . . Good writing, however.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 23, 2015
We are experiencing hell in this life, so the next should be a better place & if that is the case, as you might arrive there before me, please let me know, so worry I do not have to do...-e-

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 23, 2015
Stark, harsh, and real, George; makes the reader (me) think. Love and peace,

Regis


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