Not being a write of prowess like yourself, I know not of words that don't ring for all my words do eventually sing though many I have to the trash can did sling...-e-
Some got ping and some don't ring. I've got my favorites, but it's strange that I get praise even for the duds. You never really know until you have others decide for you whether your work is good or not.
Those are the moments the mind is re-charging. It is needed of you now to get outside, look at Mother Nature, and be glad. She will bring you new energies! Just do it, hon!! Tell Her, "Jane says 'Hello!' ".
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
Michael D.