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My Fault
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Thursday, July 6, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Can a thought lose its way

When you are trying to write?

Sometimes I get ahead of myself,

And the thought gets jumbled.

 

Poor excuse at best,

When things just don't

Appear as you would wish.

The eraser seems to get lost.

 

A poor poem is your making,

As there can not be an excuse.

You edit the poem before  it

Goes to print, so whose fault is it?

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "My Fault"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 15, 2017
LOST ERASERS CAN BE FOUND
WORDS AND PHRASES...TURNED AROUND
WE ALL WALK ON 'HUMAN' GROUND
NO WHERE HERE IS 'FAULT' NOT FOUND
THANKS FOR SHARING, GEORGE. A POET...IS STILL A POET. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Deborah Shepard
Reviewed on July 10, 2017
loved it

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on July 9, 2017
Mistakes, we all do it to ourselves George. We are just human! Amen!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 7, 2017
If we don't like what we've written, it certainly is our fault.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on July 7, 2017
I with Jane on this one.

Reviewed on July 6, 2017
LOL!!! Good one, George!

Love ya!

Jane


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