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Goodbye
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Sunday, August 20, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I felt you brush

Right by my side.

I knew your scent

And went for a ride.

 

There is no commotion,  

When love fills your heart.

There is only devotion,

That lasts from the start.

 

Caress me my love,

I'm yours till I die.

There is no ending,

Just a sad goodbye.


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 Reviews of "Goodbye"
Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 25, 2017
No ending, indeed, good-bye is merely a shortened version of the original God be with you. John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 25, 2017
ENJOYED! BITTER SWEET POEM WITH A GREAT RHYME SCHEME ABOUT A WONDERFUL SUBJECT...LOVE! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on August 22, 2017
Certainly this one ranks right up there with your best!!! 'Enjoyed....bittersweet.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on August 21, 2017
Perfect!...
Diana...

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 20, 2017
A very moving poetic song. Well done George!

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on August 20, 2017
Sweet and sad. Love it.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on August 20, 2017
This is really good. Definitely one of your best Loved the last stanza.


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