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Girlfriend
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
Friday, November 23, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 She smiled at me

And I wondered why.

I had not noriced her,

Or paid her any heed.

 

As the days went bye

We became closer

Untill I felt she was my girl friend,

As did others think the same.

 

The years passed bye and then a war.

I had to say goodbye, off to Europe.

Managed to escape being killed,

But it did leave its mark on me.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Girlfriend"
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 3, 2018
Sorry for a poor poem.

Yes we got married 3 months after I got back from the war in Europe.

We had 6 children and the marriage lasted until she died at the age of 69

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 24, 2018
That last stanza skips a beat from your girlfriend to thoughts of the war that still haunt you. It would've been nicer had you told us the bitter truth that happened when you left to the girlfriend. Did she marry someone else?

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 24, 2018
Was she waiting for you, when you got home? It seems to me this poem is unfinished.


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