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undercurrent
by ira eden → (All Poetry by ira eden)
  
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i've been protecting the child again
in my dreams
from the water
from the overflowing river
with the undercurrent
sucking at my toes
holding the little girl tight
little kitten clawing desperately
to my sweater


in the treehouse
where we couldn't stop the bomb
filling the air in dangerous caution
suffocation and she is slipping
on the bridge, skipping stones
with the undercurrent
sucking at my toes
i hold her tight


flowing to the other side
to see the distant dark dead man
floating on down the river
its awful, she screams,
and turns her head away
floating with the undercurrent
drifting on down the river


and they are waving
from across, skipping stones
with the undercurrent
sucking at my toes
brave the river,
hold her tight
and come back over


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 Reviews of "undercurrent"
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Breathtaking write, Ira! :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Excellent piece.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
I am intrigued with this one excellent.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Excellent capture of one of the dark dreams that sometimes infests our sleep.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Very compelling write..Brilliant!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Most Interesting write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Very intriguing write. Enjoyed it immensely.

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Ira - glad you visited my site and now I know of you and your lovely work :0) I enjoyed the composition of this poem - thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Brilliant. A triumph.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Very emotional, well written poem! ~Z~


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