Calling my child, come back from the page. The snail slithered not far north off the shore of a distant reality.
And i'm calling you with all of my being, my heart in my voice. There is no inhibition now.
My father and all watch, touched with tears in their eyes as the picture before me responds.
Birds and dolphins hear my song, my cry reaches to a fractal.
There is nothing else that matters.
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Reviews of "upon awakening, The End (Part IV)"
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2003
I had to read all the parts before reviewing and I must say these left me in awe!!! There is a lot going on and I will be reading them again but my initial word is bravo sir!
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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