I could see what was written . The words make the poem come alive1...Well done.....M
Reviewed by Norris Williams (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
The detail in this poem is fantastic. 'shingled cottage gray with salt', 'the aged ben franklin/simmered with the coats of driftwood', 'as the atlantic roared its pleasure/conquering the mountainous boulders in triumph/like a dali figure balancing the sea on his knee', stood out for me. Loved the poignancy in the final stanza, tinges the piece with sadness and gives a feeling of the speaker yearning for nostalgia.
Vaya con Dios