Creamy Cloud Of Slosherings (poem) by Eddie Thompson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2008

Beautifully done. I love the imagery and the emotion.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 25, 2007

Now how'd I miss THIS one, Pastor?? A wonderfully heartfelt, moving write; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))), much love, and many blessings to you~ As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 12, 2005

Moving write...fantastic my friend...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on June 11, 2005

Funny, reading this makes me think of ice cream ... sloshing ... creamy ... pink ... blue ...

On a serious note - beautiful poem and great acknowledgement to the Lord and the talents and joys He has blessed us with.

Hmm, I wonder if I have some ice cream in the freezer ... ...

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 9, 2005

What a unique perspective on how the Lord 'sloshes' the beauty into our lives. Thanks for sharing this poem, Pastor Eddie!
Jill

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

A truly moving bit of well-composed and well-written prose - wonderful!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Uplifting and spiritual. Thank you for this offering, Eddie. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

Haven't heard the word sloshing since my mother used it when I was a kid. You can be sure that the Lord has you on His canvas and is waiting to present you with heaven in all its magnificient colors of which you will play a part. Love the write

Thanks for your nice review Pastor Eddie

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on February 10, 2004

Sloshing. . .what is it that isn't creative that doesn't require sloshing?

Absolutely nuthin' my brotha! Besides, Jesus said to be creatively new, we have to get sloshed, (I think some would call it water baptism.)

blessin's, and I so appreciate your comments at my site.
keep sloshin' poetry Eddie, and make a bodacious beautiful mess :-)

cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Victoria Murray

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Fabulous write! Thanks for sharing it!

Hugs,

Victoria

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Well written and delightful read

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on February 7, 2004

Thanks Ace...Done!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

nicely crafted poem! (may i suggest replacing the "thy" with your)

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

What a beautiful expression in your lines....Just as my friend Jackie has said....."Yes please" - I would wish to be the cloud on His canvas, and believe that one day I will. Lovely work!

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

I just had to save this one to my library, I love it. The thought of our Creator 'sloshing' colours all over the clouds and sky just tickles me pink. I wrote one about the pictures He sketches - in the clouds, some time back.

can i be a cloud...on thy canvas this day
"can i be the object of thy intricate care
thy broad attentions
can you slosh what is inside me on this sky
before i die"

Yes Please. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

Enjoyed this..if only this were so easy?!! best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

this is cool

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2004

seas can't wash away the beaches of my dreams

..exceptional line..depicts the innerness and deep thought..ty!

Vesna

Reviewed by Helga Ross

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Lovely and lyrical of sound, and beauty of thought