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The Old Man His-self
by Eddie Thompson → (All Poetry by Eddie Thompson)
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Laughing at the old man
Stalking me from the shadows
Coming to capture me
Pin me to his board
Like some rebellious butterfly who won't stop fluttering

Keep flying into the darkness...probing...probing
For what?
An escape hatch?
A rabbit hole?

The handsome stranger is coming for me
Looking for me
My imaginary enemy
With his invading of my space

Roaming free like this always makes him angry
The cure for loneliness
Antidote for hopelessness
The old man his-self
Couldn’t catch me if he tried


 
 


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 Reviews of "The Old Man His-self"
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Very meaningful and thoughtful. Excellent.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 27, 2004
Interesting, thought-provoking and symbolic perhaps? Thank you for this offering, Eddie. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed on March 27, 2004
Eddie -

A very well-done (and thought provoking) poem - great!

Robert

Reviewed on March 26, 2004
Good write, Pastor Eddie; love the originality behind this fascinating write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
Hi Eddie...Now that old man could be
so many things...great imagery here..
I can imagine many stories behind this..
complex in a way...could be doubt, fear,
or even death....great writing...floria

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
oh
very interesting :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
Enjoyed it. Have fun in that rabbit hole. [smiles]


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