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Evidence
by Laura Bayless → (All Poetry by Laura Bayless)
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An experience at a Mexican restaurant. Taste of a margarita.

 Evidence

 

At the Mexican restaurant

the frosty margarita on the rocks

comes in a tall glass rimmed with salt,

tastes first of afternoons

along the coves in Monterey Bay

when I was ten,

how the hours alone

were both blissful and sad.

 

Melting ice cubes bump

against my lip, a cold shock

before the melding

of tequila and lime flows

across my tongue

and the last swallow tastes

of intoxication and infidelity… 

 

how there have been days

like that, a convergence

of pungency and perception,

how the past rolls up

like waves over boulders

on a rocky shore

and I absorb every sensation

in search of truth.

 

Laura Bayless


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 Reviews of "Evidence"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 22, 2014
i like how the descriptive nature of this poem develops into a metaphysical motif ...

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 21, 2014
A very soulful poetic song. Well done Laura! I had my first margarita this year a few days ago. Well I guess I lost my taste for the sweet stuff so I will just stick to my Merlot wine. Amen!

John Michael

Reviewed on March 21, 2014
This poem is deep. It shows the authors feelings and emotions. I think this is well-delivered for the purpose through the margarita!

Sandie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 21, 2014
Your poem shows mastery over sensory perception and memory. Last night, I could taste the same margarita that I read of here today on Monterey Bay. I could never stand the pain of ice blocks bouncing against my lips in favor of drinks at room temperature or in the case of margaritas, frozen. Strangely, drinking a good margarita never brought infidelity to mind. ;-)

Ron


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