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Looking Back
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This poem was inspired by a picture I came across of an Appalachian woman. Something about her riveted my eyes to her - refusing to stop seeing her until this poem was written.


Looking back, Momma tried too hard

The lines above her eyes so deeply embedded, like our old scrubbing board


Her face looked like some of the fossils I found in the fields


Her hands ingrained with dirt, never to by lily-white.


Our house, not elaborate by any means, was still a haven of love,

The sweat of our family saturated each piece of wood;

It leaked, it was hopelessly hot,


but it was ours and Momma always reminded us of that.  


The taste of boysenberry pie in the air

Safe from the looming clouds of coal

The innocent days of shucking corn while chewing on hay seem so out of reach now - but as an eternity then.

 


We never knew that we were different or poor, Momma made sure of that


She was never too tired to mend a shirt, or kiss a muddy brow


Though as I look back now, I wonder who took care of Momma?


 

When I was younger I would daydream about this house,

With it’s worn wood siding and pummeled roof, would my children know it as their home?  Would the gentle summer breeze kiss my children’s cheeks, or the sun shower them bronze?



The home is long since gone; a factory in its place


And Momma, she too is gone, and no one took her place.
 



 

(copyright 2004 Rose Limongi)
 







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 Reviews of "Looking Back"
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
this is good...grand imagery, good composition...this is one of the better social commentary works I have seen in a while....well done!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
very impressive, clap clap clap, take a bow Rose

joy and sunshine
HH

Reviewed by Ann Piatt
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
This is a truly exquisite write. I could relate to so much of it as well. My mother is my hero...always was...always will be. And i could see her in these images. Took me back. Thank you for this beautiful piece of writing.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
This is a remarkable write Poet. I would like to apologize for not posting my review, which has been sitting, in your folder since you posted this piece. Somehow or another it slipped my mind, but I remembered the picture, and I just drifted back to my early childhood and got lost in your write, and a storm cut the power off before I sent it . Anyways, “Looking Back” is something I always seem to do when times are rough, because I was fortunate enough to grow up in a large family, and my Mother never failed to shower us with love. You have brought back so many priceless memories and I just want to thank you for sharing this timeless piece of art! Thank You Poet.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
This is particularly poignant and pleasantly powerful. The last lines are wonderful.

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
" With the frailty of life, we lose many things throughout the years; treasured people become treasured memories."...and something as simple as a picture will trigger those memories....The love in a close knit family, gives a certain wealth to dirt, faded wood siding and hand me downs...where every wrinkle no matter where it was placed was a well worn smile..you speak of treasured memories...love this....thanx for sharing...Peace Abel


Reviewed by Mr Paton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Who can take the place of a mother {Old faithful }?
Peter Paton

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Rose, I can't explain how emotions tugged at me and feelings boiled to the surface bringing tears to my eyes when I saw the picture and read your lines. The suffeing and worry was written so clearly in the face of the woman! You knew she was living each moment of her life in poverty and worry for her children and family. Even today, we are forced to spend billions for war, while millions die of starvation. How tragic our world with little hope that mankind can
become what God intended. We make our beds because of free will that lets us look away from suffering and pain. This cannot be what our maker intended when he gave it to us. But our destiny plays out before our eyes on the stage of life, and we cannot change the outcome or the players. Faces change but greed does not. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
You have the ability to look beyond the obvious and into the soul. Thus is born such verse as these from a writer with far more talent than she dares believe

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Beautiful thoughts beautifully expressed. Love and peace to you, Rose. Regis

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
This is touching, wonderful and a great tribute to your inspiration!

~Nikki~

Reviewed on May 16, 2004
(((rose)))

haunting, powerful rendering of a mother's sacrifice and love--well done! those eyes--

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
wonderful write in retrospect. I love the gentleness in this piece.
Allen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
It sounds, Rose, that as you wrote this mesmerizing poem, you actually took her place, not many mothers or children of today could or even would try what that mother went thru...a very touching piece, glad I stopped by to read it...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on May 15, 2004
Very good Ms Rose. Knowing that area well that was their life. This makes me look back and see my early life and even us not in that area lived simple lives but we never wanted or demand as we were happy with what we had. Also mom never did ask for anything but our love.
Love this one
Have a great weekend
~~~&&&***
Tommy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
We never knew that we were different or poor, Momma made sure of that

This is a wonderful, wonderful write, Rose; and I agree, that picture is mesmerizing.

Thank God for all the wonderful mothers in the world who somehow manage to do exactly what you describe.

Reviewed on May 15, 2004
wonderful writing, rose! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
Beautiful write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
Beautiful story poem Rose!!

Love Tinka


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