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cute enough
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a look

i was told cute enough,

what is it that fades away with time,

a look that does not go into the soul,

something, that is outside not in, a brief something thats giving, one that we jugde other's by,

what a mistake, what a tragady, what a thought,

is it this, that makes relationship not last,

is it what we see and not what we learn over time,

my my what a thought, beauty is said to be in the eye of the beholder,

the factor of a realtionship,

what we say know longer count, but yet it is what we want in a mate,

is it the seeking that get's us, the melting pot in all,

my friend i know longer no, because it is the judging of all,

the mistake, that get's correted after a mile stone of regrets and mistakes,

looks do they see into the soul, do they make up for what is real,

no my friend it is the falseness of each one.

inspired by donovan the fury, true crimes a friend

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 Reviews of "cute enough"
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Awesome poem thank you!

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
as if cute enough would pull us through
beyond the mirror of an image of self
to the world of soul

i like this but would tighten it a little

thank you,
donna.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on November 14, 2003

is it the seeking that get's us, the melting pot in all,

my friend i know longer no, because it is the judging of all,

the mistake, that get's correted after a mile stone of regrets and mistakes, looks, don't see into the soul nor do it make up for what is real.

no my friend it is the fasleness of each one.

Well said!!!


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