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A Dark Cocoon
by Susanne Leist → (All Poetry by Susanne Leist)
Tuesday, August 22, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A DARK COCOON

 

The moon passes the sun.

Morning bows out, all done.

Darkness unveils its grim poker hand

to the drum beat of the marching band.

 

A moment of blackness

brings fears of more darkness.

What if your life was all dark?

The sun never lefts its mark.

 

The mornings and nights the same,

bringing you mountains of pain.

No relief from the bleak cocoon

like digging your grave with a spoon.

 

Years fade and turn to dust,

your memory goes bust.

Trapped in walls of despair,

without holes for the air.

 

Is this living or not?

She is stuck in one spot.

Too afraid to venture outside,

a further blow to her lost pride.

 

She hides in the nursing home,

where she reaches for the phone.

“Help me,”​ she cries out.

No one can help out.

 

Lost in her dark cocoon,

where she fits like a spoon.

Waiting for death to take its flight

to a better place in the light.

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Alan Cook
Reviewed on August 28, 2017
I get the point about eternal darkness, but temporary darkness is interesting in itself. Mark Twain used an eclipse in "A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court" to get his time traveler out of trouble, and they have been used by real people to escape from their enemies.

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on August 23, 2017
Okay, for those of you who are having problems with my poem, I will try to enlighten you to my meaning. The eclipse this week brought wonder and fear to people. So, I took this one step further and asked how it would feel to be faced with this darkness all the time. My mother lost her eyesight from a progressive disease to her retina. Excessive exposure to the eclipse would bring on a similar degeneration of the retina. She lived in a black hole, as pointed out by Ronald Hull. Her life was beyond difficult in many different ways.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 23, 2017
Her plight is more like a black hole than an eclipse, but a fascinating write nonetheless.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on August 23, 2017
I;m not sure I understood this, but it was an interesting write none the less.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 22, 2017
Ditto what Jerry said. The eclipse is an awesome moment, revered by the ancients and still revered. Nature beyond our scope. John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 22, 2017
Excellent! Thoughts turned into words. Very nicely done, Susanne.


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