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Inner Explosion
by Linda Roman → (All Poetry by Linda Roman)
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I covered my ears, but the voices penetrated through


They kept getting louder and louder


Closer and closer


I couldn’t shake them


I closed my eyes, but the visions were still there


They kept getting clearer and clearer


I tried to fight it, but I couldn’t hide my feelings


The hate was taking control of my blood stream


Flowing so deep, I could now taste it


I savored this sweet flavor of revenge


I wanted it to stop


I really did


I just couldn’t


The satisfaction of every thought


One more satisfying than the other


Pleasures of inflicting pain to others


Each destructive thought


It felt so good


So good


I just knew it was time


Time to release the beast


The animal that life’s trials and tribulations has created


Finally coming to the surface


So many years of build up anger


Bottled inside


All coming out


Charging


Like a furious lion that hasn’t eaten


Conquering everything in sight


All bringing relief


Subsiding the pain


And the anguish of life


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Inner Explosion"
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 7, 2005
I love the flow, Linda. As you go, you can actually feel the fury in the pace of the words and the venting to emotions - the intensity of the passion in it. Great work!!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
oooo I like this ..indeed I do...wow!
Saved this one! Thankyou Linda!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
strong, raw emotion here...splendid work, Linda.

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
Powerful write Linda, welcome to the Den and thank you for visiting my pages, Happy New Year...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
This is not fantasy this is real life, I could feel the anguish and relief in reading your wonderful piece.
Well done Linda,
Reg

Reviewed on December 30, 2004
"Inner Explosion" depicts the emotions to flow on to the lake of a grand poem poetized with the lexicon of a wise soul.

I enjoyed the reading of this poetic masterpiece, named "Inner Explosion".


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on December 25, 2004
Like a furious lion that hasn't eaten...nice evocation there. Keep up the good work!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on December 22, 2004
Wonderful thing about writing--it vents the emotions.
Keep it flowing outward and sharing it my sister, and allow us all to share the words and encourage you.

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
I love the energy and passion in this write; thanks for sharing! :)
~Kari Anne~

Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
I have read that one of the keys to effective writing is to capture your readers attention with your opening sentence. Well you have certainly achieved much more than that with this creative and fascinating poem. You enable your readers to ride on an emotional roller coaster ride experiencing the haunting frustration and inner wrath that seeks its remedy.

Wonderfully done, Linda. My sincere compliments.

Chuckie

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
You sure did capture this one. Big time got this one right one the nose. Beem here am here. Thank you for this. Must send this to all

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
Well Penned ....Linda
great line smooth cadence.

William ......Love & Peace

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
Very powerful write and great capture of the release!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
Linda first time I've read your work but I'M SURE I'LL READ A LOT MORE IN FUTURE. Thanks for reviewing my work as well.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
Yup, can relate... better out than in, this one, I think! Hope you're feeling better now - and that you have been able to vent your anguish to the skies so that there will be no "payback"! Like a stopcock going off... sense a real feeling of relief! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 11, 2004
Very powerful poetry Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on December 11, 2004
Shake those emotions real good before you uncork them, that way they explode like a Pepsi leaving the bottle empty of all lifes acids. well Penned

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Linda, raw and unrelenting write about the darker urges that reside within us all.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Wow, this is intense to say the least. Strong and forceful write. Excellent display of pain inflicted...both given and taken.

Allen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Powerful stuff, Linda. I could not resume breathing until you allowed me at the end of this enthralling creation. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Welcome To Club Of Life Its Portals,Pitfalls,Downs & Outs Of Holy Hell!

Credit For Write!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Blimey new kid on the block, some write..Splendid....

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
wow Linda, the intensity of this poem is outstanding! your thoughts & feeling flow effortlessly in this very powerful poem ...


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