An interesting write - leaves the reader with more questions.. And room to come to their own conclusions. To me - I would read this as being someone thats suffered a long debilitating illness.. That in many ways has already been dead for a long time. Perhaps the mourning has all been done long before the person took his last breath. But then again... I've been known to be wrong. LOL
In any case - excellent write.
Melanie
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2005
The grief is in there somewhere. Truly an intriguing write that asks more question than it answers.
Whoa
Guess he reaped what he sowed.......
but then again, maybe he never knew......
some people go thru life that way......no consequence that touches them.....
its sad
I really do not know how to respond. This is very well written and the content excellent...yet to not weep? That I myself question, but I know not the whole story here... To me this is a really good write.
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In any case - excellent write.
Melanie
Good to read you again Graham
Guess he reaped what he sowed.......
but then again, maybe he never knew......
some people go thru life that way......no consequence that touches them.....
its sad
healing for you dear poet........
pax A
Allen