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First Warning
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First Warning


The purring in my ears
and loss of hearing
smudged everything

my sight
was hazily awkward
as was my tongue control

legs
which were born strong
shamefully betrayed me
and like twin judas towers
falling
they left me on my arse
skyward looking
and dumbfounded

Graham..11-mar-05

  

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 Reviews of "First Warning"
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
Hmm - think I've been there actually.
Fascinating little poem, I hope it was not prophetic.
best
Ian
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 15, 2005
wow, very powerful piece here
revealing indeed
Reviewed by Jim Moore (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2005
I liked this, nice use of visuals and language. It could be ice, it could be an illness, it could just be a false step, I like how you let the reader decide. Well done!

Best,

Jim
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on March 11, 2005
First warnings are exactly that...and needs your attention...everything has a reason and I hope you find its cause..fine write

Allen
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 11, 2005
a very revealing position ...
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