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Where Such Thoughts Linger
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This felt kinda rushed, but I don't know.

He awakes to early morning sunshine

Casting silhouettes of tangled branches

Along his bedroom wall, swaying in

An unfelt wind, they seem to nod

At him, or perhaps they grope for

Cobwebs unattended to in the farthest

Corner from which he lay.

 

I am older now he thinks but it

Is a hollow thing, with no real

Meaning behind it, still it echoes

There where such thoughts linger

When a person grows accustomed

To rooms without voices, a place

He doesn’t know he remembers.

 

A slight frown helps him to forget

That he remembers, a skill learned

Years before now honed to perfection,

He wears it often, comfortable as a pair

Of ragged old shoes it seems most at

Home in the lines that creases his brow

And the down-turned corners of his mouth.

 

Like his thoughts, it seems to linger there.

 

 

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“Where Such Thoughts Linger”

 
 


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 Reviews of "Where Such Thoughts Linger"
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on January 24, 2005
Doesn't seem rushed at all to me, George. In fact, that rushed feeling you spoke of may be indicative of your preconscious. This is where all real poetry comes from, but usually in different concentrations. If you've ever written a poem that seems to write itself, you've tapped into pure preconscious.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 20, 2005
He wears it often, comfortable as a pair
Of ragged old shoes

A fascinating poem, George; and it doesn't sound rushed at all.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 20, 2005
"He wears it often, comfortable as a pair
Of ragged old shoes it seems most at
Home in the lines that creases his brow
And the down-turned corners of his mouth"

Nicely done George!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
very creative and stimulating ...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
...a place he doesn't know he remembers... my, you do have a wonderful style of expression, george. nicely crafted!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
Has a mysterious, eerie quality I like. It could be the start of a short story or novel.

Ron

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
but are they is he comfortable
because if he is comfortable
in some ways (maybe all ways) he is happy
enjoyed the thoughts

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
You do create thought provoking images in the mind by your excellant writes.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
this is excellent and so very well written

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 19, 2005
Sometimes George, you just turn me inside out!
awesome images in this self -reflective splendid prose!

Love, Eileen

Reviewed on January 19, 2005
it's not rushed; it's perfect! well done, george!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D


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