Just a man and his ride, both observed and observing.
--------------------------------
sunny seventy-nine, but it feels like seventy-eight,
and it's blue to the horizon
no matter which way I turn
a thousand eyes or more
roam over a pair well matched,
spotting bald over scarlet
and envying the image of freedom
they don't see me like I do,
they don't see me at all
quick stop at Quik Trip,
amazing how that plays out,
and Redemption serves as my bar stool
as I chew on a bit of cheap cheese
another fan comments
on that amazing glistening ride,
and mentions how "his" is in the shop...
I can tell he's lying, just to relate
I don't see them like they do,
they don't see it at all
a throbbing in my knuckles
and the breeze in my face
announce to the world
that I'm leaving with a roar
half of a cheap chew of cheese
is pinned under my right thigh
to save it for later,
away from the milling masses
they don't see the world as I do,
they don't see it at all
and a right, and a left,
then a left, and a right,
put a man in a different location
but still in the same position
and faithful old Redemption
serves as cafe chair, and table,
as the last half of cheap cheese
goes down like a bitter pill
not a single soul here knows me,
acting like they can't see me at all
great-tailed grackles are posted
on the fence, on the light post, in the tree,
and they're singing of simpler things
separately, yet together,
as a choir near a hundred voices strong
a pre-teen boy and a buxom young girl
round the corner on the trail by my spot,
and she's got that look on her face
as she jogs slightly ahead
of that fuzz covered grin
I wonder if they tell the same tale?
they stop, she stretches,
lithe limbs put on display
as first one foot, then another
find flaunting rest on the fence
and I chuckle as a young man drools
like a fool as he looks her over
wondering how to impress her
before she's done and runs away
she doesn't see him like he sees her,
and she doesn't seem to see it at all
hormones in a whirlwind
and his body a tempest,
he stretches like she does
and, with a yelp, falls right in her arms
she giggles in consternation
as she sees that he's suddenly found heaven,
so with a heave and a sigh
they part, and she runs away
he doesn't understand like she does,
he doesn't see it at all
the grackles are suddenly mocking,
a cacophony of whistles and chirps
with the ringing of singing
suddenly much louder than before
a dainty brown lady has arrived,
and she's stirring the grass
with her head down low
and tail feathers all on display
seems she enjoys the calls,
from the shadows, and the poles, and the fence
'til one lucky lad gets some courage
and comes down to plead his case
she doesn't see him like he sees her,
and he doesn't seem to see it at all
shining armor, all blue-black-purple,
with a chortle in his throat
and a hitch in his wing-spread step
let her know what he's all about
two birds dance, as the others all quiet,
with a duck and a weave and a flap
and suddenly the world finds a different rhythm
so unlike what you and I are used to,
and the wind blows the trees just like the grass,
and the water on a nearby pond ripples,
and the heat from the sun soaks into my head
from the reflection of a passion red glow
and the chit chat of fine chat and gravel
sings new songs under slow running soles
as the people file by in oblivion
not knowing, not slowing, just going
and going, and going, and going,
never slowing for the knowing
they all wish they had...
brown beauty chortles in consternation
as she sees that he's suddenly found heaven,
and with a flap of her wings, she flies
whilst he still dances around all the lies
and the world snaps
right back into reality
grand looking great-tailed grackle
looking, for the world, like painted perfection,
shimmering blue-purple-black
in a field full of sun...
and dismay
I wonder if all those bird calls are in mockery?
regardless, he looks over his shoulder
with what equates to a smirk on his face
as he struts, once or twice, just a little bit more
as if he knew exactly what he's doing
then flies ever silently away
not to where he started,
but rather away from the shame,
all the while, just a little over five feet away
the brown lady starts again with her play
I left them all there, the great-tailed grackles,
and the trees, and the grass, and that place,
and I rode away with a new understanding
that we're all, though so tellingly different,
like the beasts, we're exactly the same
and the flash of white lines, with the bleating of horns,
settled me back into that same old rhythm
as I imagined the way you danced, and preened,
and called to me from the depths of my shadows
and I thought on that day I got brave
and told you what I saw in your eyes,
and how, after a quick song and dance,
you flew...
you don't see me like I see you,
you don't seem to want to see me at all
settle into the rhythm fool,
just settle into the rhythm
sunny seventy-nine,
but it feels like seventy-eight,
and it's blue to the horizon
no matter which way I turn
a thousand eyes or more
roam over a pair well matched,
spotting bald over scarlet
and envying the image of freedom
they don't see me like I do,
they don't see me at all
I'm not what they want to be
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Reviews of "learning through my lunch at LaFortune"
Your recurring theme "they don't see me like I do..." is a truism about our individual perceptions of self vs. how others perceive us invokes a lot of conflict and misunderstandings--the stuff that gives good writers fertile grounds for sampling. You have done it very well. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
It does kinda come out for ya then... and I allude to it in the beginning. "Bald over Scarlet" is a big bald biker riding a shiny bright red bike. No beard. ;)
I really like the atmosphere created by this one. A bit long and repetitious, like a long lunch outside munching on cheap cheese. Although our read it twice I'm not sure what" spotting bald over scarlet" meant, although you know. And, while I get the impression the writer is riding a motorcycle, it doesn't come quite clear. I do get the image of a bald, bearded biker, with a scarlet bandanna.
The analogy between bird behavior and human behavior is well presented.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
The analogy between bird behavior and human behavior is well presented.
Ron