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For the sake of his gaze upon me
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Monday, March 27, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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“fewer endless cycles”
“for the sake of his gaze upon me”

 



Pretty, lone,
cyber-girl-driver
caught up in
his magnetic appeal …

a glimpse of him, suddenly,
streamed to her, cute, pink
H.U.D.

Dazed and twirling …
slowly falling, lazily,
through thermosphere,
resembling a bumble bee
on inadequate wings

broken G.P.S. offset her
intergalactic journey to ride, but,
her feather-weight, sensually shaped
spacecar cajoles while she heads,
southerly, on those flimsy wings,
towards him, sauntering on his
voice of dreams … she
quivers

Spinning, daft, her chronic whirl
faulty, electronic, blunder …
a space-car thing in tints of pink
coughing carcinogens
all over heaven … coming,
down, like a top slowing,
in an awkward wobble

Seeing her, he could not distinguish
his dreams from some kind of jumbled up scenery
his seers gate reported … a hologram?
… tapping keys!

BUT,

SHE

IS REAL – LY COM – MING DOWN!

he shifted left—then right …

BAAAAAAAM!
She, lands, right, smack, dab, in
the middle …


 

Written By Darkest Angel
r.w. April 8, 2017



“For the sake of his gaze upon me”  (rough1)(had to have fun first)

 

 


Her whirl is chronic
silly electronic blunder
a space-car thing in tints of pink
coughing carcinogens all
over heaven – a rambling fury
how could she have known,
when she headed south,
gazing preciously into his
strong, careful, eyes she
was actually due north

My god, these things …
… made by Acme … ?
humph, a RESET BUTTON … ?

CLICK! … the stupid thing BOBBLES
it should have shook or wobbled

afraid his gaze has all
but became a memory – lost
she torques in outer space, and
her jeweled tears are falling –
so ashamed, she pulls off her
wooden leg and bangs …
the dash – it wobbles
loose …

intensely watching – IT CONKED HIM!
her giddy voice slurring happy tones -- getting close
stars around his warm brow – his shapely face

what the … I'm in outer space – not you!
HEY!
H-E-Y!

Unexpected reentry is causing heat
in the cockpit – she was barreling way
too fast downward – twirling 'round,
'round and 'round – shaking

 

 

 

Written By Darkest Angel
Written March 27, 2017 

 

  


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 Reviews of "For the sake of his gaze upon me"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 24, 2017
A kaleidoscope of images... ...the verses leave me whirling. Thank you for sharing, DA. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 28, 2017
Aside from strange references like a wacky hitchhiker, I have no idea where this is going--or coming. But apparently there are some eye candy teasing going on that elicits a bonk.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 28, 2017
Colorful first stanza. Like a good appetizer before the main course. Visuals could well portend a comedic sex film. (-: I'm sitting here wondering about your mind Dark; maybe more Vitamin B12? Hahaha. Enjoyed this. Continued inspiration. Peace... r

Reviewed on March 28, 2017
Second draft is action packed! voice of dreams took it down down down.


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