Not being a particular fan of rhyme, this piece struck me as perfect, giving not even a hint that you had to consult a thesaurus or rhyme dictionary (which far to many rhyme poems seem to suffer from such effort). Well done.
Thanking Ed and Jerry for helping my poor German. Statistically and not politically, what your poem states in terms of what is happening is true. And, in spite of what sharks and insiders claim, the opportunity to make a living with hard work and some skills is rapidly disappearing in favor of wealth and privilege gaining more wealth and privilege.
The strange part is people engaging in insider, greedy activity can't see where it is leading. Some kind of, "let them eat cake," syndrome.
I had to look up "schadenfreude," and for a word that is long and full of truthfulness, it actually hooked me, and I'll never forget the word. Uh, now spelling it is a different matter, don't ya know.
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Regis. 🌺🍁
Well written Jerri, and appropriate sentiments for the time we live in too.
enjoyed the read!
well said, point made
Never Stop Writing
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The strange part is people engaging in insider, greedy activity can't see where it is leading. Some kind of, "let them eat cake," syndrome.
Ron