Not being a particular fan of rhyme, this piece struck me as perfect, giving not even a hint that you had to consult a thesaurus or rhyme dictionary (which far to many rhyme poems seem to suffer from such effort). Well done.
Thanking Ed and Jerry for helping my poor German. Statistically and not politically, what your poem states in terms of what is happening is true. And, in spite of what sharks and insiders claim, the opportunity to make a living with hard work and some skills is rapidly disappearing in favor of wealth and privilege gaining more wealth and privilege.
The strange part is people engaging in insider, greedy activity can't see where it is leading. Some kind of, "let them eat cake," syndrome.
I had to look up "schadenfreude," and for a word that is long and full of truthfulness, it actually hooked me, and I'll never forget the word. Uh, now spelling it is a different matter, don't ya know.
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Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Well written Jerri, and appropriate sentiments for the time we live in too.
enjoyed the read!
well said, point made
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The strange part is people engaging in insider, greedy activity can't see where it is leading. Some kind of, "let them eat cake," syndrome.
Ron