Spontaneous Combustion (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Very well-written, this one shows great skill. Your word choice and brevity makes this poem. Thanks for the delicate hand balanced by a passionate heart- cool stuff.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Ya know...........lol
the phoenix lived 500 yrs.........
now thats stamina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol......this is wicked!!! lol what fun!!! Love it kate!!!
pax......Anita :)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

what can one say but yesyesyes?

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

Sweltering!!! ...The embers will be glowing for a long time with this one! ...Hot, stimulating write, Dear Poet!

Cynthia

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

hot and provocative imagery!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

Kate, is the Phoenix rising from the ashes? Does it knock at the door? How will it be welcomed. This is a very interesting poem dear heart. There is an answer and not a riddle. A beginning, just a beginning. Will Phoenix soar now? Is the compass set in the right direction? Where does the answer lie. Inside the heart? Will the flames consume one forever. WHAT AN EARTHSHAKING SHATTERING POEM from a beautiful heart and soul. Hugs Bill xx

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

"Love's long legs." Great line. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

KATE KATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow OKAY this one is so smooth and excellent the
sensual overcasts in this fire verses is excellent...
So visual emotive and warmm............
Excellent creativity and beauty to this one ...
Alot of combustion....

SMILES LOVE YA,
And your poems Peg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

I love the way you can couch erotica in words
that have no connotation of such unless you are
deft enough to know how to arrange them! Kate you
are a unique and brilliant poet!Kudo's

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

"Fahrenheit 451" move over - what an absolute stellar poetic write!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

WOW!!! There�s a whole lot of SCORCHING going on here in the Den today, Poet!!! This is an absolute real burner!!! I loved it!!! HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!! Now where�s that darn ice tray when I need it�lol.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

I feel the temperature rising here - burn baby burn! Hot stuff!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

K K K KATE, this is g g g great.

Hmm Phoenix rising (Andy change your thoughts now)

Ifhenicks.

I know some ones review will be hot, so take cover..lol

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

BEFORE The fire brigade, GREENPEACE will catch you!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

Wonderfully penned, Kate. So intensely passionate.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

Call the Fire Department; Hot, Hot, Hot!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 18, 2004

Kate, very hot stuff. You and Belle are on the same sheet of music this morning. I hope it's catchy. You got me sweating.