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Neck Massage
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NECK MASSAGE

Upstairs room
above The Bar
Intimate
We were so close my bare toes
almost brushed against his knee
as I sat in the front row
with my legs crossed

The blues guitarist
gave us his best;
I was transfixed by his
amazing, agile fingers
and beautiful, sensitive hands

I was also in agony -
my neck needed massaging;
His screaming music matched
the mutilated feeling in
my upper vertebrae...

On the electric Fender
he was too Rachmaninov
for a rough neck;
the horny pads of his fingertips
thrummed too tight,
too intense along the length
of the guitar's chordal column.
And he hugged the slim pale body
just too close -
like a bad dose of stomach ache

But the acoustic:
He rocked and gently rolled
her fuller figure love-like
with circular motions,
caressing the strings
and striking them harp-like
to make them sing

He massaged her neck
like stroking that of a
gleaming white swan or
the smooth polished coat of his
gorgeous Black Beauty

* * * *

Acoustic analgesia
anaesthetised my pain...

Killing it softly
with his song,
as Roberta might say


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 Reviews of "Neck Massage"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
What is it about ladies and neck massages, but it sure is a winner:))

Love the way minimum words maximum impact. Top class Kate..

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Kate you are a wordsmith of the highest echelons!
I'm glad I didn't miss this gem, ms word seductress!;-)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Anywhere you are and all your experiences turn into a journey into wonderland. You can see things in an experience that I stumble blindly by or ignore. That is your edge dear Lady. You turn the ordinary occurrences in life into rare gems of existence. Few can look at life and pull these jewels out of their mind. You have a gift; someday you will arrive at the zenith and look down on us from a mountaintop high in the heavens. Hail Princess of Light!
Bill

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
very creative, well written poem!

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
You write with such skill. This is so descriptive, and I like the word choice you used to describe the music/instruments, really brings the poem alive for the reader, your observations are spot-on.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
Oooooooh...Kate. How I would have loved getting a
stiff neck, too, at a BLUES concert!!!
Sounds like, despite it, you thoroughly enjoyed
yourself, as I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of prose.

One thing though. Put an upper case F on fender.
Those guitar people are so fussy about their products!
I know. I have a "Strat."

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
this one feels so good... especially loved the acoustic verse.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
There comes a point in time, when if lucky, a human being may get a chance to live in the times of reading perhaps one great Poet!!! Since joining this site, I do believe I have had the honor and privilege of reading many, but, Poet, you have massaged my soul on more than one occasion with your creative use of stringing and making words together dance off the blank pages!!! Your poetry is an absolute pure joy to read!!! Thank you for sharing it!!!

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
a fine poem about guitars and guitarists - and the pain in the neck was the grit producing the pearl I guess!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
Kate, I was feeling and watching every movement and I agree killing me softly with his touch smiles this is awesome so creative and you strung it masterfuly ...... SMILES...

Lady Peg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
Interesting write, Kate; sounds like marvelous therapy!

Perhaps a Book of Heavenly Home Cures by Kate is in order.

Reviewed on June 21, 2004
A sensual write unfolding of feelings. Well-done, Kate!

~ Sandie May Angel ~

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
WONDERFUL ACOUSTIC ANTI-PYRETIC...I have heard of acoustic anti-depressent but never heard of analgesic effects...WONDERFUL poem...

Debs


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