I Am (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

So you're the four elements.

Stunningly put together write K K K Kate...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Superbly written! Electrifying energy in this beauty!
Love the finale!;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

moving, fertile imagery!

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

A great tribute to that certain someone.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

We are all we want to be and more, and this is a mirror image of that thought, superb write, take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

ok
at the risk of sounding cliche.......i love the elementalness of this poem.......we all are elements of nature, both spirtually and physically......and the way you entwined these ideas into poetry makes this a poem to be respected and remembered........you are so very intelligent and talented in your words.....you are....because you are :)
pax......Anita

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Loved the element factor in this write.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

great one here, Kate. i am in awe of the way you close this... really nice.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

This is so touching the depth the message this one has made a trace on me today im keeping this one...
hugs
Sweetest kate....

peggy

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Absolutely beautiful, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

WOW!!! An absolute timeless write, Kate!!! Excellent poetry, Poet!!!

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

we're on the same watery wavelength today; the zephyr wind came blowing in ----- nice poem!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

I am in awe of this wonderful poem!

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

We are here for a reason. Great lines.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

This is simply AMAZING, Kate!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

You are a starlit night
The moon above
The ebb and flow of life
The peace of a gentle brook
A wild flame
The maddness in life
The spark that ignites
The wind inside
The special rose
A clarions call
A bird in flight
A souls delight
The final light
You are everything

Sort of like this poem, didn't I. What a gentle touch in a heart so rare that it creates stardust in the air.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Nice write, Kate. I really like the way you end this.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Outstanding write, Kate! ~Z~