Strong sunlight and lengthening shadow
locked in battle
this late-summer day,
vying for territory
like anchored stripey windbreaks
Neither are the bluebottles lazily content
but instead manically harassing
the solitary living
as if they themselves
were all but dead:
Welsh-seaside summer
on the wane
Quiet is descending from
the brooding rocky outcrops
and brackish dappled summits
high above the salts and seaflats
Dry leaves rustling bid Adieu
as the last retreating
caravan with trailer
nods farewell
and heads for home,
craning
for one last glimpse of the sea
as it rocks
down the narrow twisted track
that nurses jealously her blackberries
The mellowed watercolour landscape
yields a hushed sigh
and bleeds her blue-brown coastal colours:
Now comes the season
of mists and ample fruitfulness;
oh my goodnesssssss
this is so dreamy....such an easy feel to all of this.......
life should be this generous.....maybe it is......we just are not always in the position of realize it......
the ending to a poem should always have an impact either subtly or directly ... it should present the state of mind the poem has emcompassed ... i really like how you ended this poem ...
Poetry so filled with wonderful imagery, fantastic write.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Sing a few of our favorite tune as the wheels went round...NOOOO. It can't be you, that awful song. The welsh are the real Britons. (what a let down) old Bodi, sure mucked up...
But the poem is full of great descriptions, and you escaped!!
this is so dreamy....such an easy feel to all of this.......
life should be this generous.....maybe it is......we just are not always in the position of realize it......
I am waiting for my bounty! lol
love this.........A
can sing them while I enjoy the vibrant
visuals your poem portrays!Welcome back Kate!;-)
Poetry so filled with wonderful imagery, fantastic write.
warm hugs
Elga
But the poem is full of great descriptions, and you escaped!!
Reindeer
Sandie May Angel
Carmen :-)
Welcome Back!!