A butterfly's true -coloured wings emerge
damply fragile.
Having dissolved their musty covers,
they assume the strength
of hyper-tensile steel
Dear Kate...sister angel....what a write...you are on the way to poetic immortality....written with much depth....I love your poetry because you write on everything under the earth with much excellence...and it is very hard to do I know...but you do it with ease...another gem from you....will write to you tomm....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
Dorian Grey?
Nicely done Kate....
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
This is as always stunning and profound excellent my soul sis.... happiest of Holidays MZ Kate. Take care we may meet soon.
HUGS
ALWAYS MUCH LOVE KATE xoxoxxoxo :(
:)
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays
you have been a blessing to me and Bhuwan and Debashish,.,
Yes, of course, Calendula, Pet... I just didn't want folks to jump to the conclusion that I am at death's door - there are so many kindly hearts out there who might be sending me flowers or something!! It is full of my customary taste for theatrical melodrama!! LOL Kate xx
Very creative write, and definitely thought provoking..best wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
metaphor.... a figure of speech in which an expression is used to refer to something that it does not literally denote in order to suggest a similarity...yes yes, it has all that in wonderful technicolor! BUT Kate, after reading a lot of your poetry, I find myself thinking, have YOU creaped into this somehow? Perhaps its me.
Its a thought provoking little number and love it. Oooooo, hope you are, yes of course you are, having a Fantastic time at college.
A very adroit write...
Peter
A butterfly's true -coloured wings emerge
damply fragile.
Having dissolved their musty covers,
they assume the strength
of hyper-tensile steel
Dear Kate...sister angel....what a write...you are on the way to poetic immortality....written with much depth....I love your poetry because you write on everything under the earth with much excellence...and it is very hard to do I know...but you do it with ease...another gem from you....will write to you tomm....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN
Nicely done Kate....
HUGS
ALWAYS MUCH LOVE KATE xoxoxxoxo :(
:)
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays
you have been a blessing to me and Bhuwan and Debashish,.,
"What do you expect if I am dying?
How am I supposed to behave while being born?"
Wonderful poetic questions.
Most Interestingly Done Different N Good!
TRASK
and how deeply you appreciate the canvas of life.
Its a thought provoking little number and love it. Oooooo, hope you are, yes of course you are, having a Fantastic time at college.
Pax A