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Incarnate
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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...Only a metaphor! :) K xx


INCARNATE


You say I am full of contradictions;
that I am hard to understand.

What do you expect if I am dying?
How am I supposed to behave while being born?

Birthing-pangs and death-throes confuse
as they have no Rules;
the Fine Art of Drowning is not a spectator sport.

A butterfly's true -coloured wings emerge
damply fragile.
Having dissolved their musty covers,
they assume the strength
of hyper-tensile steel.


For you, all this is as interesting
as watching paint dry;

For me, this is the bleeding water-colour
canvas of my life.
My masterpiece.

Prepare for its unveiling. 

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 Reviews of "Incarnate"
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
Some metaphors are closer to the heart than we would care to admit Kate...
A very adroit write...
Peter

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on November 25, 2004

A butterfly's true -coloured wings emerge
damply fragile.
Having dissolved their musty covers,
they assume the strength
of hyper-tensile steel

Dear Kate...sister angel....what a write...you are on the way to poetic immortality....written with much depth....I love your poetry because you write on everything under the earth with much excellence...and it is very hard to do I know...but you do it with ease...another gem from you....will write to you tomm....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
Dorian Grey?

Nicely done Kate....

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
This is as always stunning and profound excellent my soul sis.... happiest of Holidays MZ Kate. Take care we may meet soon.
HUGS
ALWAYS MUCH LOVE KATE xoxoxxoxo :(
:)
Ladye Peg

Happy Holidays

you have been a blessing to me and Bhuwan and Debashish,.,

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
and no doubt you have it down to an art ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Interesting lines. I love the overall theme.

"What do you expect if I am dying?
How am I supposed to behave while being born?"

Wonderful poetic questions.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Every Canvas Of Life Is Fading Into Its Past Only You Will One Of Few Who'll Paint Your New Life,i.e. Masterpiece!

Most Interestingly Done Different N Good!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
I love the finale Kate it sums up what the poem is about
and how deeply you appreciate the canvas of life.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
I really like this, simultaneous endings and beginnings, this is a very thought provoking write Kate.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Yes, of course, Calendula, Pet... I just didn't want folks to jump to the conclusion that I am at death's door - there are so many kindly hearts out there who might be sending me flowers or something!! It is full of my customary taste for theatrical melodrama!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Very creative write, and definitely thought provoking..best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
metaphor.... a figure of speech in which an expression is used to refer to something that it does not literally denote in order to suggest a similarity...yes yes, it has all that in wonderful technicolor! BUT Kate, after reading a lot of your poetry, I find myself thinking, have YOU creaped into this somehow? Perhaps its me.
Its a thought provoking little number and love it. Oooooo, hope you are, yes of course you are, having a Fantastic time at college.

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Your imagination and creativity are endless. This is so very interesting. Although it is a metaphor, it's very real.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
Thats some dialogue......I know its fictional, but to be a fly on the wall during such a discussion would be pretty intense.........
Pax A


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