Can't resist this repost today. I am really into "hearing voices" at the moment!! I have been here for about a year, now, and I feel as though I can recognise and know each of yours - and even hear them in my head?! That means that I must also have one of my own, presumably, but have no idea what it might be as I seem to me to be completely all over the shop!! I find all this fascinating... anyway, here it is:
THE VOICE
Is it possible to fall in love
with a Voice?
His cadence and rest;
the height and the breadth;
His breath - in and out.
Can you resist the compelling allure
of his Call?
Magnetising, drawing you
with fine invisible chords
which in some mysterious way
connect you.
Have you heard the sound
of the Beekeeper,
whistling softly to the Hive,
but yet know
that he invites you,
alone, His Queen?
Do you know what it is
for an inaudible Whisper
to govern your thoughts;
transforming your scorching sands
into bubbling pools,
drawing water from the rock?
Have you fallen in love
with a Voice you have never heard,
but which curls invisible fingers
helix around your DNA
and cherishes your uniqueness?
...For there is only One -
And it's His.
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Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2005
nice
yes i have and i found him
:)
hrm, a lot of people interpreted this to mean the Voice of God, but because you said Queen, and because I was just recently finally reunited with my voice for the first time in this lifetime, I interpreted it to be the voice of the One for you
interpreting it either way, yes and yes and i like it....
gypsie
I am so glad you reposted this. Very intriguing. :)
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Do you know what it is
for an inaudible Whisper
to govern your thoughts;
transforming your scorching sands
into bubbling pools,
drawing water from the rock?
I've known such a Voice the stanza above is describing. It resides within me. I reared my children to listen to The Voice within for it will never lead them astray, tell them a lie or talk smack. THE VOICE is beautifully weaved, Kate.
i think you have received the call, the call to follow His love and path, and that is a special journey. And its good to know he speaks thru the people we know and the poems we read. k
the voice is the fiber of a soul ... its texture, color and fabric are uniquely different ... its tonal quality can be mysterious, definitive or downright seductive ...
I think of a voice as someone's writing style. I can honestly say that I've never imagined the sound of a voice here at AD. I have certainly fallen in love with certain writing styles. This is a very well-written, thought provoking poem, Kate.
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Kate this is a kicker, I just loved it. Right off the bat when I read the title Voice, I heard it, and the bee thing too I heard. Yeah, just fascinating stuff, I seldom hear voices myself, but the sensation, the reaching out, the accepting of it, them, an ultra cool and off beat concept, ty hugs Al
I do believe that I have a voice for each poet I read here, Kate. Even when I have to read a boring textbook, I add a droll voice to the words. Perhaps we get so used to being spoken to, that it is automatic for us to apply a voice to text. It would be interesting to learn if someone who had been deaf their entire life and suddenly acquired hearing would say that they did or didn't apply a voice to the written words. Sorry to go on and on here, but your poem got my thoughts spinning. Great Job!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
I love the image of the beekeeper that you shared with us. As usual your write is very unique and the answer is yes you too have a voice that we recognize and enjoy.
Kate, I'm not quite sure I agree with the others that you are referring to a higher spiritual power when you speak of the "voice", nor do I believe that you do not have one...Ihave seen and read your voice ever since we first traded words on the den. I do believe this is a highly personel glimpse into your own desires and it is wonderful of you to share such a deep inspiration recieved no doubt from your own muse. Great work, Kate.
Kate, you are a genious,you wove this so that it could be any voice
we wish to make it,and in the end you tied it to His voice which is all our voices for we are His voice here on earth.Divine work Mz K.
A voice moves me as much as any other factor that arouses our senses.
We All Hear Voices--19 Little Children Talk To Me As To Loven Them More Times Enough I Yell Shut Up---
But As Children Are Children I Call Them My Adopted Little Children-Are They Real You Bet & Yet You Will Get To Meet My Them:
My Out Of Control Little Children__
From My Childhood I Always Had Voices Heard Them Talk To Me--Big Problem Is Was --I Did Not Listen Well To **Voice(s)For If I Had I Be That Much Further Ahead In Life_
Your Own **Subconcious Mind Will Talk To You-- Guide You If You Listen Well Enough And When You Heed Its Word Of (God) Guidance You As I Will
Survive Hallocaust Upon All Humanity To Come In Blink Of Your Eye_
You Get To Meet Me TRASK & Not 19 Other Voices ---But 19 Out Of Control Little Children In There Revenge--Me,TRASK --Simply:
I Just Turn Walk Away --I DO NOT LOOK BACK!
Your Friend,TRASK
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Darn, not me then, cos you've heard my voice. Oh woe is me, how canst I live after seeing this, a voice a voice oh to be a voice.
On the other hand plenty of fair maidens here. I oftentimes wonder the same mortal thoughts.
Nae I willst nae name them. Yet they seem like angels.
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yes i have and i found him
:)
hrm, a lot of people interpreted this to mean the Voice of God, but because you said Queen, and because I was just recently finally reunited with my voice for the first time in this lifetime, I interpreted it to be the voice of the One for you
interpreting it either way, yes and yes and i like it....
gypsie
Do you know what it is
for an inaudible Whisper
to govern your thoughts;
transforming your scorching sands
into bubbling pools,
drawing water from the rock?
I've known such a Voice the stanza above is describing. It resides within me. I reared my children to listen to The Voice within for it will never lead them astray, tell them a lie or talk smack. THE VOICE is beautifully weaved, Kate.
excellent images, fantastic concept ...
Take care,
Sherry
Huggy Beer
we wish to make it,and in the end you tied it to His voice which is all our voices for we are His voice here on earth.Divine work Mz K.
A voice moves me as much as any other factor that arouses our senses.
etw
now........lol
if this is the voice of a poet here in AD....I guess I am out of touch, I have words only in this area....no one has touched me on that level.....
but this is also the internet.....and I have felt the voice of friends while chatting.......a bit scarey....and wonderful....and amazing......
This can be taken on so many levels............
For the pedestrian spirt like mine.......I just go with the flow of traffic I guess.....
Enjoyed this Lady K.........your OK!
pax A
But As Children Are Children I Call Them My Adopted Little Children-Are They Real You Bet & Yet You Will Get To Meet My Them:
My Out Of Control Little Children__
From My Childhood I Always Had Voices Heard Them Talk To Me--Big Problem Is Was --I Did Not Listen Well To **Voice(s)For If I Had I Be That Much Further Ahead In Life_
Your Own **Subconcious Mind Will Talk To You-- Guide You If You Listen Well Enough And When You Heed Its Word Of (God) Guidance You As I Will
Survive Hallocaust Upon All Humanity To Come In Blink Of Your Eye_
You Get To Meet Me TRASK & Not 19 Other Voices ---But 19 Out Of Control Little Children In There Revenge--Me,TRASK --Simply:
I Just Turn Walk Away --I DO NOT LOOK BACK!
Your Friend,TRASK
On the other hand plenty of fair maidens here. I oftentimes wonder the same mortal thoughts.
Nae I willst nae name them. Yet they seem like angels.
See you sun beaut..
This is exquisite! A grand tribute to the Voice above all voices--the Lord, Who has given you your uniqueness and talent! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
And I love what the Voice tells you to write. :)