Time to make with the Ben&Jerry's and to curl up in the favourite old baggy jumper again... I'm sorry, but I just keep going back to the old favourites when I'm feeling beached and becalmed... K xx
HOLD ME
Hold me lovingly,
like a book -
flat open in the palms of your hands
so you can feel the bones
of my spine.
Scan my face
for traces of hidden meaning
concealed amidst the text
of your favourite poem.
Run your fingers,
phrase by phrase,
from head to toe
through each and every word -
missing nothing.
Press me breathless
to your heart
and let me be the unseen object
that exists everywhere
in the centre of your gaze
and the thought that lingers long.
Let me be your inspiration
for yet another sunlit day
For I am nothing
if left unopened.
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Reviews of "Hold Me"
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
Kate, I am left breathless! Oh, this is a truly lovely little gem. Your ending is priceless!!
We'll have to do something about opening you up Kate,(goes to look for tin opener lol). This is superb Kate as always you blend the sensual and sublime with measured ease.
Paul;-]
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2005
What a marvelous concept (especially so for poets) and the wonderful
metaphors, skillfully used.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!
Hugs and smiles.
I can read you like a book today, Kate. You're bewitched, bothered and bewildered, or is it becalmed, be still,
beside yourself? Hope no spider beetle burrows your good book. k
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
I love this!
~ Mari
if left unopened"
So true and this is inspirational
and mind clearing. Meditative really.
Great piece Kate!
Poetess supreme ... lovely, simply lovely - always so unique!!
Blessings,
Robert
Peace Be With You,
Joseph
This is one of my favorites--so glad to see it again! I agree, one of your best, top drawer!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
eileen
Paul;-]
metaphors, skillfully used.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!
Hugs and smiles.
beside yourself? Hope no spider beetle burrows your good book. k
A very sensual poem I must say!
I really like it! Great descriptions
too! BRAVA!
Becca P (Henry) Lang
And glad to hear that you are beached and becalmed! Enjoy the sun and the sand.