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Total Meltdown
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Another re-write... well, it helps to pass the time! :)) Actually, a new semester has just started, so I am up to my eyes... K xx



TOTAL MELTDOWN

Taut, supple skin
yielding at full stretch;
breathing only
through moistened pores.

Blood-engorged heart,
pounding ears and throat.
My brain a clenched fist
of light inert helium,
pressured within its
blown-balloon shell...

I am the skin
of a tightened drum
vibrating within
the timpani
of erotic love.

My senses tentacled antennae,
astral receptors moonwalking,
tasting the salt
of a breathless aura.
Blind vision burns,
waxing my eyes aflame.

I am ready:

Touch me now
and I shall melt
sacred as communion
upon your tongue;

Taste me
and I will explode
a creative Big Bang;

Heaven's breadth within
the compass of your fingers
as we fuse together
wholly.

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 Reviews of "Total Meltdown"
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
Oh oh oh KATE!

What an incredibly explosive erotic piece !!

Brilliant in composition!

Your creative vision astounds me!

~ Mari

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 16, 2005
Erotic, sensual and completely enthralling, Kate. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on April 16, 2005
This is fantastic, Kate. Love it. Wholly passionate, reminding me of the old 70s saying, "I feel like bustin' loose!" LOL

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
other people just aren't as alive as you, kate. mind-blowing!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
very sensual...you got it this time, although the last version may have been just as good

Reviewed on April 15, 2005
delightfully sensual, kate; very nice! well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
Sizzlingly sensual, syntatic sex lol...God's what a mouthful stunning as always Kate.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
This is so enticing and erotic.
A passionate and sensual ride.
Excellent Kate!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
Wow!! This is fantastic..love it..ooooo hot..
saved it..YES!!!


Vesna*

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
Whew! Excellent work, Kate.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2005
Explosive erotica ... I enjoyed reading very much!

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
a big bang is deinitely in the spirit of this poem ;)

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
Wonderful sensual write.....

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
Wow, a scorching write! Great job Kate!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
OK, Kate...mission accomplished...I am thoroughly melted.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
A meltdown occured

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
I'm trying to comment Kate but the meltdown is quicker than I am;-)
Sensational superb sensual succulent uh oh-------------------

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
Wow Kate this is still so hot it sizzles. Beautiful write from a beautiful lady.

Felix

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
Thats erotic, yet metaphysical, its cerebral and at the same time solid. This is the circuit to a total meltdown, no breakers here.......and when it happens.....

Black Out!

Your internal grid must have a unique wire.........and an experienced conductor!

This is great!!
pax A


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