The Wrong Side (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

some mornings it don't pay to get out of bed, but have a cup of coffee and slowly you'll come back to radiant life. k

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Kate,

Exquisitely imaged, you must have seen me this morning LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Kate,

In a poetic word - perfect!! Each work you do is a masterpiece held up for all to see ... brilliant!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

poetry at its best! "shut down my mind like an apatheitc fan" luv that image as well as the many others so have so poignantly expressed ...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

This is a great poem. I love the way
your verse describes this, now the
next time I'm a grouch in the morning
I'll need to think of this, perhaps it
needs posting right next to my bed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

You are just way too cool!;-) So glad to know even young brilliant students of the holy grail of poetry, can look like me in the morning;-)Thanks Kate!LOL

eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Boppa, I could do with the ol' Fairy Godmother "Bippity boppety boo" first thing in the mornin, I can tell you to make this Cinderella scrub up to Prince-like standards... just so happens someone's smashed me glass slipper, too, so fraid it's just broken glass all round here today... as usual I am jokin: this is based on an idea thrown up from something I read earlier today! It's actually 1845 UK!! Take everything I write with a pinch of salt... or All Bran, as the case may be... except the early morning horrors! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Ah yes, I know that feeling so well, feeling this one this morning, feel like a wet rag, ha ha. you expressed this feeling perfectly!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

you ought to see ME when I get out of bed! LOL especially when i am flaring or am sick! NOT a pretty picture! LOL but SERIOUSly, this is a darn good poem; keep em coming, kate!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Gee Kate you paint such a pretty picture of yourself waking up I hope it is all a mind wakeup cause you are surely too pretty in real life to look that bad even just waking up. lol

Boppa

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Too much detail here Kate Lol...your preponderant knack for creating stunning imagery with your superb pen, works too well in this piece I fear. However, I must admit, some mornings I look like something thats dropped out of a Baboons bottom...No, I'm not writing about it either...lol.

Superb Kate, I'm sure you scrub up well though, chuck a bit of slap on, and all that...Hey-presto! 'Poetess superb-us'.

Paul;-] (now ducking to avoid any incoming missiles).

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Some times I wake up like that. LOL

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

LOL! Yes, that first look in the mirror in the morning can be frightful! And the stupor you describe is all too familiar. Ah, its Monday, Kate. Have your coffee(or tea as preference would have it) and greet the day. Hope the rest of it fares better for you...