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Becoming Immortal
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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BECOMING IMMORTAL


"Don't whisper to me in twilight,
let not your breath just kiss my neck
in passing;

I want not your brooding presence
but Damascus rays to blind me,
to transfigure my mind
making eagle's vision mine:
radiant as Jerusalem's gleaming domes."

Blazing fire of your word
appears suddenly in my doorway,
consuming illusive shadows
by which you're otherwise known.
No way in or out but through,
gloriously drenched, baptised
in liquid streams of life.

Molten your luminous ink cascades
flooding my virgin page.
Not a sheet, not a leaf to separate or hide
as breath, words, ink and parchment
we unite.

Inspiration with illumination fused
becomes immortal holy light.   

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 Reviews of "Becoming Immortal"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Oh Kate! This is a transcendent, molten and luminescent all-consuming passion of a write. Kudos!

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
I have to agree with everyone else, I know it's a cop out but it's all been said, all I can do is just add more superlatives Kate...oustandingly superb.

Paul;-}

Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Kate,

Glorious! Masterful! Spectacular! Help me, here...I'm running out of praise--I concur with the board, one of your best (out of many). THank you, Poet and friend, for reaching out with this one--it is absolutely WONDERUFUL!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed on June 16, 2005
spectacular lines, kate; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Molten your luminous ink cascades
flooding my virgin page.
Not a sheet, not a leaf to separate or hide
as breath, words, ink and parchment
we unite.

kate...poetry at its very best....I salute you for composing and sharing this rare gem with all of us here at the AD...kudos to you sister angel...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
LOL at Anita. But that aside, outstanding write. I agree with all and Jude especially. I see your work getting tighter everytime I drop by. You're such an insightful soul, Kate, with a most uncommon gift. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Kate,

I am agreeing with the board...this is a keeper!
The imagery in this is stunning!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
with each poem you are becoming bolder and empowered with masterful imagery that not only inspires but motivates ... awesome poetry, Kate ...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
who inspired this!!
I want to jump his bones!
lolol
kidding!!!
this is magic!
lol
pax A

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Hardly know where to begin, Kate. This is my kind of write on so many levels. I'm keeping it to savor your fantastic imagery again! Dawn

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
This is one of your gems!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Your way with words shines in all your writes. Splendid.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
The last line of this poem truly says it all, Kate. Delightful write,
Jill

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
With this poem you are immortalized, (or is that paperized;-)
Whichever, you most certainly deserve a panegyric!
All joshing aside Kate this is splendid!

Eileen


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Kate of Tarsus. Don't be in too much of a hurry, to become immortal.
I can see the light, speggetti, I mean pastor Kate..
Nice one Kosher Kate..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
gloriously drenched, baptised
in living streams of life.

As is this marvelous poem, Kate.


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