Irresistible (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 1, 2005

This is a sensual poem with lot to ponder beyond the erotic elements. A very good job. Hope everything is good at your end.

D

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2005

An explosive write Kate! Don't you feel better now? :)

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 29, 2005

Very sensual and indicative Kate
You excel yourself in a torrent of passion..
Peter

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

wish i wrote it........whew!
:)
pax A

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

Sherry, I am also beginning to wonder the same tging ... lol ...
This is just way too hot for just steak ... lol ...

God bless, Katey hun!

Sandie.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

Hachacha! Hot! Paul's review is hilarious but he says it all. I don't know is this from red meat or from that man in the picture, Kate? LOL I had some red meat Sunday night and my pen didn't get this hot. ;-) Smoldering write, lady. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

OHHHH Hot! Phew! This is simply irrisitable, superbly erotic...so-much-so I may have to go lie down for a while lol. The simmering imagery has burnt itself into my mind, and even now is running around causing all sorts of hormonal reactions lol. Oh I best go before this gets out of hand...no Freudian pun intended lol!

Excellent work Dear Lady
Paul;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

Wow! All this from eating red meat??!! You might want to slow down a tad today, Kate, and have some fish and chips.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

It's only six in the AM here, and I was ready for a "NORMAL" day... Now see what you've done to an old man who doesn't go there these days. I'm glad my trip was so enjoyable, however.
Kate, your pen and ink have surely had something special about them, lately. Am glad to know the source and substrance. Wow! - and WOW again and again ! ! ! ! ! - Great piece of writing, too~ - Bill

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

We all have that volcano simmering in us waiting for the right moment when the fire of passion explodes and we are drained to our very core.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

I called them zits, changing ones facial landscape.
Look what you've done. Felix is having goats..

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on November 28, 2005

very sexual, Kate, very did-the-earth-move-for-you? and very Elizabethan (is that Liz Hurley?) and good description of the latent powers made manifest in .... well, you know what I mean! k

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 27, 2005

"So it is that my earth moves
and pillars of your heavens
quake"

Absolutely splendid!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 27, 2005

Whew!!I believe I need to step outside for a little...airrrrr (pulling out collar and blowing down my shirt, fanning face).....LOL. Go ahead and blame this on those hormones in the meat, Kate...but tell me...was it the dead meat or the live meat? (oh my gawd!!! did I really ask that???) This is an excellent and tasteful bit of eroticia, Kate, not a usual genre for you but you mastered it with skill and grace.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 27, 2005

oo la la Kate!;-) You know how to whet the appetite! Superb esoteric erotica;-)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 27, 2005

Very senuous write crossing the line between sensualy erotic words that so perfectly blend with and the way your own inner feelings are reacting with life. Oh sweet Kate how enticing you can make a poem seem to a sex starved man (just kidding) wonderfful write hun, I loved it.

Pops

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 27, 2005

you bleed passion in a way that makes volcanoes dance and heavenly pillars crumble, exposing the treasure only secreting hormones can embrace ... hot and heavy ... better eat a steak tomorrow ;)